Sunday, February 19, 2006

I must quit smoking

Under revision
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That cramps mah style said...


tum kehte ho aapke sweet poems koi pade ya nahi.. hum to khush honge.. sahi baat hai.. mai ekdum khush hoon... :D.. abhi ye mat socho ye thank you bolegi... :P


Ardra said...

ahhhh, but the memory of the high, the remembered fragrance titillates my senses again and again, and I succumb yet again to the temptation and revel in the sweet toxic fumes of your memories...

Vivek said...

Comments from Dud Sea Scrawls:

smoking gun
By bleu on Tue, 2006-02-21 00:04

make sure you fire multiple rounds. I am glad your resolution is not ‘not to fire’ Sticking out tongue

Even as you smoke your nicotine
Having a shot or two of pot
Do all of it in darkness clandestine
but do make your tea while the pot is hot Sticking out tongue
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Are you still smoking what
By Pradzie on Mon, 2006-02-20 18:45

Are you still smoking what i think you were smoking when you were smokin this poem out?

You seem to be enjoying what you’re smokin, so i would say, Happy Lung Cancer dude! Smiling
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By Fizo on Mon, 2006-02-20 18:43

you are on a roll..aren’t you?
this was such a cool metaphor and done very well too…
bahut achche Sharma ji..aur sunaaiye!!!
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wow !
By chetiyaar on Mon, 2006-02-20 17:32

THat was a very cool metaphor and done at every level ! lovely ! Man vivek,you are really making me read poems !
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Vivek Ji
By Silent Melody on Mon, 2006-02-20 10:32

Vivek Ji lagta hai you are on a roll; Smoke on or rather Don’t. Liked it.
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By ano on Mon, 2006-02-20 08:55

that was a cool metaphor. nice one vivek!
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Vivek said...

Thanks guys.... there is no smoke without fire, and this one nearly burnt me out.... as I said, I must quit smoking:)!

AdHocQuirks said...

wow! great imagery here..enjoyed this!

Blue Athena said...

Blown away. Totally.