tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post111500736645552324..comments2023-11-05T04:39:42.422-05:00Comments on KaviSpeak कवि-उवाच: Na jaane kyun!Vivek Sharmahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00794419464988884719noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post-1135639975686307492005-12-26T18:32:00.000-05:002005-12-26T18:32:00.000-05:00chayalife comments:on May 3 2005 3:44AM delete ...chayalife comments:<BR/>on May 3 2005 3:44AM delete this comment block this user<BR/>:-))<BR/>you are relentless!! And you will be without sleep at this rate....:-D<BR/>I am talking of your exams my friend...<BR/><BR/>Chay<BR/><BR/>vi comments:<BR/>on May 2 2005 12:40PM delete this comment block this user<BR/>Vivek,<BR/>Nice one!<BR/><BR/>Good Luck for the exams!<BR/><BR/>viVivek Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00794419464988884719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post-1115103454292230082005-05-03T02:57:00.000-04:002005-05-03T02:57:00.000-04:00Nahin doond rahe thein hum un ko!Woh mere raaste k...Nahin doond rahe thein hum un ko!<BR/>Woh mere raaste ke mussafir thein!<BR/>Aur shayad hum unke raaste ke!<BR/><BR/>Chan pal, jabh miley toh lagaa, apne aap se mulaaqath hui hai!<BR/>Apne aap se mulaaqath karne ki yehsaas nayi theen!<BR/>Magar wah kya khoobsoorath!<BR/>Ithni khoobsoorath ke <BR/>Us khoobsoorati ko paane ki paagal pan mein,<BR/>zindagi kho baithi thi mainey!<BR/>Phir! Hum donon mussafir kho gaye thein!<BR/>Apne zindagi ki khoj mein!<BR/>Waada kiya bhi tha apne aap se, <BR/>Toh! Eik doosre ko nahin dhoonde ne ka,<BR/><BR/>Waada kiya bhi toh thaa apne aap se!<BR/>Ke Eik doosre ko nahin pehchaan ne ka!<BR/><BR/>Nahin doond rahe thein hum un ko!<BR/>Woh mere raaste ke mussafir thein!<BR/>Aur shayad hum unke raaste ke!<BR/><BR/>Shayad yeh meri aazamaish hai ke <BR/>Aaj Phir se,<BR/>Wohi mussafir mera raasta kaat gaya!<BR/>Miley bhi toh yun, ke kabhi bichde hi nahin thein!<BR/><BR/>Magar yeh kya?<BR/><BR/>Aaj phir waapis un galiyon se guzar ne ko man hi nahin kartha!<BR/>Phir se, un anjaan baaton par ghaur karne ka man hi nahin kartha!<BR/><BR/>Haan ! shayad yeh meri aazmaish hi hai!<BR/>Ke jiske wajhe se, hum ne khudaa ko dhoondne nikale,<BR/>Woh saamen aagaya!<BR/>Haan yeh aazamaish hai, <BR/>Jis se Khuda kah raha hai!<BR/><BR/>"Chunlo hamey ya hamari karamath ko!"<BR/>Jis khoobsoorath yehsaas ki wajhe se hum Khudaa ko dhoond liya<BR/>Kya koyi, us yehsaas ko chunega?<BR/><BR/>Yehsaas khoobsoorath hai?<BR/>Ya<BR/>Us Yehsaas ko banane waala Khuda?<BR/>Ya <BR/>Us yehsaas ko hamare dilon mein daalne waala Rabb!<BR/><BR/>Haan yeh aazmaish hi hai!<BR/>Haan hamara faisal bi atal hai!<BR/><BR/>Hum aaj chunegey us yehsaas ko dilon mein daalne waaleki karamath ko!<BR/>Kya patha, woh yehsaas, kisi aur ke kaam aajaye.<BR/>Kisi aur ki zindagimein, mere khuda ko dhoondne ki eik maqsad banjaye?<BR/><BR/>Haan! yeh hamara faisla hai!<BR/><BR/>Us yesaas ko hum yahin chode jaa rahe hain!<BR/>Us yehsaas bananewaale ki khoj mein¨<BR/>Bas eik yehsaas mein ithni khoobsoorathi <BR/>Toh shayad us ko banane wale ke paas <BR/>Aur kithni khoobsoorathi!<BR/><BR/>Bas ! Hamey na fikr hai, kisi ko khone ki!<BR/>Hamey na fikr hai kisi ko paane ki!<BR/><BR/>Nahin doond rahe thein hum un ko!<BR/>Woh mere raaste ke mussafir thein!<BR/>Aur shayad hum unke raaste ke!<BR/><BR/>Mera raaste mein ujaala hai!<BR/>Shayad Rabb mujhey apnaya hai!<BR/><BR/>Hum ne bhi Rabb ko chun liya hai!<BR/>Magar hamare raase ke Siraj( lantern or sun ) se mil liya hai!<BR/>Agar raasta bathane ki shukriya adaa kiya hai!<BR/>Toh shayad, Rabb-e-Karamat ki izaath hi kiya hai!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post-1115070192768756322005-05-02T17:43:00.000-04:002005-05-02T17:43:00.000-04:00Likho Vivek Likho...:-)))should I translate that p...Likho Vivek Likho...:-)))<BR/>should I translate that poem you posted as a comment for me?? vivs...i know only spoken hindi...and I am deffy not a poet,<BR/>but this is what i feel...<BR/><BR/>"kya kahen...<BR/>kuch aise likhe hain aapne, <BR/>ke dobaarah dil ko kuch chhoo sa gaya, ek halka sa dard<BR/>woh ek puraana lamha tanhaayi ka <BR/>aur yeh ek naya lamha khaamoshi ka<BR/>dono pade the bin dekhe bin samjhe<BR/>phir se koi shayar aaya <BR/>aur un yaadon ko chhed kar, <BR/>phir se rula diya...<BR/><BR/>Likhta hai vivek jab bhi<BR/>Aah si uth ti hai<BR/>Na jaane kyun!<BR/><BR/>Hai hai!! <BR/><BR/>Likho Vivek Likho!!!<BR/>Aur apne imtehaan ko bhool na mat....:-))))))))<BR/>Bon Chance my bard friend!!Arpana Sanjayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11105327830137369428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post-1115070108399645522005-05-02T17:41:00.000-04:002005-05-02T17:41:00.000-04:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Arpana Sanjayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11105327830137369428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post-1115067544384820512005-05-02T16:59:00.000-04:002005-05-02T16:59:00.000-04:00Wah Vivek wah! Na jaane kyon tum polymer science/c...Wah Vivek wah! Na jaane kyon tum polymer science/chem-engg mein ho :)RTD2https://www.blogger.com/profile/07710784540684786379noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post-1115053393395161212005-05-02T13:03:00.000-04:002005-05-02T13:03:00.000-04:00hey Vivek,ur nazm urf kavita....reminds me of the ...hey Vivek,<BR/><BR/>ur nazm urf kavita....reminds me of the title song of this old TV serial called 'Kashish'....remember? can't quite place exactly what it was....but it used to evoke a similar feeling :)<BR/><BR/>Nainon mein boondein hai,<BR/>Labh pe muskaan si<BR/><BR/>Tum chupsi bhi kah gayi<BR/>Maano daastaane kayi<BR/><BR/>Saath thi, phir bhi shaayad<BR/>Akela hi tha<BR/><BR/>Kehte kehte ruk gaya tha uss din<BR/>Ruswaiyan kai....<BR/><BR/>very nice! :) cheers to whatever makes people write such beautiful words ;)<BR/><BR/>take care,<BR/>enig!El enigmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04105047062252045849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post-1115043995178593492005-05-02T10:26:00.000-04:002005-05-02T10:26:00.000-04:00lollz bluehue!:):) kavitha: phoor murjha jaate hai...lollz bluehue!:)<BR/>:) kavitha: <BR/>phoor murjha jaate hai, par anardaana<BR/>kharaab nahin hota<BR/>na jaane kyun;)!Vivek Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00794419464988884719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post-1115043476261712512005-05-02T10:17:00.000-04:002005-05-02T10:17:00.000-04:00array "urdubhashi" fizo ji:),aap kripya woh anuvaa...array "urdubhashi" fizo ji:),<BR/><BR/>aap kripya woh anuvaad mein madadd kijiye!! (99.9FM)!<BR/><BR/>Hindi vs Urdu:<BR/>I took a course with Alok Rai, who was then writing a book on Hindi and ever since my definition of Hindi changed!! From genesis, Hindi is no different from Urdu:), (Google search for reviews about the book/author:)) but I agree I could have called it nazm instead of a kavita! I usually write in "tatsam hindi*", no one seems to understand or speak that these days!! (*Derived from Sanskrit)Vivek Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00794419464988884719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post-1115024250392579222005-05-02T04:57:00.000-04:002005-05-02T04:57:00.000-04:00naa mujhey kavitha likhni aathi,naa hi kavitha sam...naa mujhey kavitha likhni aathi,<BR/>naa hi kavitha samajhmein aathi.<BR/><BR/>aap ki kavitha, hai eik bhaavna,<BR/>jeev ki jeene ki eik aur bahaana.<BR/>haan!<BR/>shayad hai kisi ki woh tamanna,<BR/>magar aaj phool, kal anaar daana.<BR/><BR/>( Not plagiarisd from anywhere.<BR/>Wrote just out of the reactionary feeling when I saw your poem )Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com