tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post113218444499371024..comments2023-11-05T04:39:42.422-05:00Comments on KaviSpeak कवि-उवाच: I duuno where I am goingVivek Sharmahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00794419464988884719noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post-1133553337167479922005-12-02T14:55:00.000-05:002005-12-02T14:55:00.000-05:00thanks for pointing out the flaws bleu; if you can...thanks for pointing out the flaws bleu; if you can do that more often, I will be most indebted to you!<BR/><BR/>ardra: as always your words are inspiring and appreciated: you write so welll yourself:)!Vivek Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00794419464988884719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post-1133178452848443452005-11-28T06:47:00.000-05:002005-11-28T06:47:00.000-05:00Just Dream away...and March ahead...make your own ...Just Dream away...<BR/>and March ahead...<BR/>make your own trail...<BR/>Sucess too is sometimes misunderstood...<BR/><BR/>Kabhi Kabhi rasta hi manzil ban jaati hai...<BR/><BR/>ardraArdrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10005169454353807178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post-1133118814235939242005-11-27T14:13:00.000-05:002005-11-27T14:13:00.000-05:00if you get the melody ... this is something to use...if you get the melody ... this is something to use pod cast for :) <BR/><BR/>loved this one too. since you said ...<BR/><BR/><I>Show me my flaws and possibilities<BR/>Through your words I'll correct myself</I><BR/><BR/>there are a few typos ... :p <BR/><BR/><I>I believe as a child I knew myself<BR/>That blissful ignorance caused me no pain!</I><BR/><BR/>something doesn't sound right ... I believe I knew myself as a child? <BR/><BR/><I>But there I few things I've realized</I> (replace I by a)<BR/><BR/><I>I'm sure this won't forever last!</I> (be after forever?)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com