tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post114956581643096821..comments2023-11-05T04:39:42.422-05:00Comments on KaviSpeak कवि-उवाच: Kaavya, Not a Love Story: Episode IIVivek Sharmahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00794419464988884719noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post-1150040039607132352006-06-11T11:33:00.000-04:002006-06-11T11:33:00.000-04:00From Sulekha:denice _menace comments:on Jun 7 2006...From Sulekha:<BR/><BR/><BR/>denice _menace comments:<BR/>on Jun 7 2006 7:24PM<BR/><BR/>Err I read just the last line about Pyjamas..<BR/><BR/> <BR/><BR/>awesome<BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/>Vivek Sharma comments:<BR/>on Jun 8 2006 10:14AM<BR/>Thanks Denice, :) I hope to keep the melodrama flowing, and oscillate between funny episodes and dark ones!Vivek Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00794419464988884719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post-1149823767234077542006-06-08T23:29:00.000-04:002006-06-08T23:29:00.000-04:00whaaaa?By Fizo on Wed, 2006-06-07 20:00Sharm ji,th...whaaaa?<BR/>By Fizo on Wed, 2006-06-07 20:00<BR/><BR/>Sharm ji,<BR/><BR/>the first episode was very neatly done…I expected more on those lines but somehow felt there was a change of tracks here with too many characters thrown in….<BR/><BR/>and just a ques…are the long paras without any breaks whatsoever intentional?<BR/><BR/>all in all a very interesting series in the making looks like..I will be reading it with aplomb!<BR/>» reply | email this comment<BR/><BR/><BR/>Fizo-ji<BR/>By Vivek on Thu, 2006-06-08 15:32<BR/><BR/>Comment from her highness, the Queen!Smiling:)Smiling<BR/>O dear Fizo-ji, Where have you been? !! !! !!<BR/><BR/>DSS (apology to all others) was like a dead barn without you<BR/>There is no fun, no depth in creating a yarn without you<BR/>(Give me a few days, I will come up with a better poem)<BR/>Two words from you, and my broadest smile is now showing:)<BR/><BR/>On a serious note: I am having some diffuculty in proceeding with my novel, for I have written a very few stories. So this series is like an exercise to figure what pitfalls I fall into while telling a tale. Two I have found already, the long paras:), and unexpected shift from light first episode to dark second episode.<BR/><BR/>Be as critical as you can be. I still swear by your extremely well-written series, and would love to learn more of the craft:)<BR/>» edit | reply | email this comment<BR/><BR/><BR/>ok..<BR/>By Fizo on Thu, 2006-06-08 20:08<BR/><BR/>I give you a few days..come up with that better poem…you know how I err..love poems..esp odes to ME that is Eye-wink<BR/><BR/>ok now to the serious note : it doesn’t at all seem like you are having any difficulty..but throwing too many characters so early in the series could be like biting off more than one could chew…!<BR/>but hey any series is good as long as the reader is waiting for the next part and you know I am Smiling<BR/>» reply | email this commentVivek Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00794419464988884719noreply@blogger.com