tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post114982292397787810..comments2023-11-05T04:39:42.422-05:00Comments on KaviSpeak कवि-उवाच: Kaavya: Episode IIIVivek Sharmahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00794419464988884719noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post-1150040148125091982006-06-11T11:35:00.000-04:002006-06-11T11:35:00.000-04:00From Desicritics.org#1temporalURLJune 9, 200610:28...From Desicritics.org<BR/><BR/>#1<BR/>temporal<BR/>URL<BR/>June 9, 2006<BR/>10:28 AM<BR/><BR/>vivek:<BR/><BR/>great going so far...:)<BR/><BR/>to borrow beady's (dr. bhaskar dasgupta's) punch line take the following with a grain of salt:<BR/><BR/>--name the episodes<BR/>--shorter paragraphs<BR/>--allow time to develop characters<BR/>--go easy on facts - allow time for absorption<BR/>--introduce breaks or use some other device for flashbacks<BR/><BR/>and keep writing<BR/><BR/>#2<BR/>Vivek Sharma<BR/>URL<BR/>June 9, 2006<BR/>12:01 PM<BR/><BR/>Temporal: Thanks much for advice.<BR/><BR/>My craft will be as good as criticism from the readers:) Beady's advice imprinted into my head:)Vivek Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00794419464988884719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post-1150039893995450232006-06-11T11:31:00.000-04:002006-06-11T11:31:00.000-04:00From Sulekha:UnEngaged comments:on Jun 9 2006 2:50...From Sulekha:<BR/><BR/><BR/>UnEngaged comments:<BR/>on Jun 9 2006 2:50AM<BR/> I read all of the episodes so far....Didn't think I could actually keep all the characters straight in my head, but your writing made it easy. Waiting to know what happened next...Although I have this uneasy feeling of listening to gossip which is not what I like to. These are just stories, as in fiction, right?<BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/>Vivek Sharma comments:<BR/>on Jun 9 2006 9:05AM<BR/>Thanks for your comment and following the story. I am searching for meaningful criticism and feedback here:), though of late, sulekha has become duller on that account.<BR/>Reality is more bizarre than fiction:)<BR/>This is experimental fiction, story is self-evolving mass of words, which I assemble to master art of dialogue and the art of making characters look real. Of course, it is meant to sound like gossip, tale is meant to be simple and ordinary, and it is full of cliches.:) But I hope to keep you interested (maybe for another four or five episodes) and throw in some surprises and laughs.Vivek Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00794419464988884719noreply@blogger.com