tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post115429648206270127..comments2023-11-05T04:39:42.422-05:00Comments on KaviSpeak कवि-उवाच: Footaa ChiraagVivek Sharmahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00794419464988884719noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post-1155436973479590452006-08-12T22:42:00.000-04:002006-08-12T22:42:00.000-04:00oh yeah also wanted to mention. typos galore here....oh yeah also wanted to mention. typos galore here. case in point, iktra, daroron, woh, etc. <BR/>one suggestion, I've practically given to everybody, read out what you've written and see how it sounds. If it sounds wrong, rework it. <BR/>take carebilbohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16324778684367886967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post-1155436791841119752006-08-12T22:39:00.000-04:002006-08-12T22:39:00.000-04:00i'd read somewhere a difference between showing an...i'd read somewhere a difference between showing and telling through one's writing. Needless to say showing is better. You are definitely getting there but the imagery needs more work. Maybe less words , more ideas .bilbohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16324778684367886967noreply@blogger.com