tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post6322448727511356051..comments2023-11-05T04:39:42.422-05:00Comments on KaviSpeak कवि-उवाच: Janki and MansoorVivek Sharmahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00794419464988884719noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post-83852889372236212122007-08-24T06:47:00.000-04:002007-08-24T06:47:00.000-04:00I like it somewhat. You are a bigger bolly fan tha...I like it somewhat. You are a bigger bolly fan than me, and when I smell cliche, it usually is a huge turn-off. The writing I like, and am hoping that the plot provides more punch and unexpected twists in subsequent parts.Promahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17542920539791806373noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post-83515238357823315802007-08-24T06:33:00.000-04:002007-08-24T06:33:00.000-04:00This comment has been removed by the author.Promahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17542920539791806373noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post-50702630378332808812007-08-24T00:56:00.000-04:002007-08-24T00:56:00.000-04:00Proma,The narrative itself admits that the story i...Proma,<BR/><BR/>The narrative itself admits that the story is of Bollywood genre.<BR/><BR/>Btw, if you had delivered me a pinch or a punch, (first comment), was there a need to say it was friendly one (second comment)? Wouldn't I fare much better if you trash this piece, and let me lie down, knocked out, or maybe see if I can even recover and fight back? :)<BR/><BR/>Janki and Mansoor is another experiment; lets hope I can learn something from it.Vivek Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00794419464988884719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post-80726594488065204332007-08-23T22:41:00.000-04:002007-08-23T22:41:00.000-04:00And of course the title - Janki and Mansoor gives ...And of course the title - Janki and Mansoor gives away some secrets. I'd love to see new titles to part 2, 3,etc. <BR/><BR/> Btw , when I said bollywood, I meant the likes of - Rudaali, Shatranj ke kiladi, Zubeidaa sorts.Promahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17542920539791806373noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10404411.post-87025878034390692007-08-23T22:35:00.000-04:002007-08-23T22:35:00.000-04:00You're going to hate this - but this story screams...You're going to hate this - but this story screams bollywood. Both the story and the writing. Hmm... waiting to be proved wrong :)Promahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17542920539791806373noreply@blogger.com