http://www.cortlandreview.com/issue/38/sharma.html
The poem is a variation on Ghazal. In a formal Ghazal, the words before the repeating phrase must rhyme between the couplets.
This is technically my first poem in a proper poetry journal, and add to my "published list", which includes a letter in Poetry magazine and three (Hindi) articles in Divya Himachal (newspaper).
Feel free to comment on the poem and its rendition here.
