She doesn't really exist,
* she is just a rumor!
We have never met,
* I really donot know her!
Yet I strive and strain,
* suffer with a sweet pain!
Aching each day to meet,
* her sashaying down the street!
My love is quite abstract,
* has blossomed without contact!
And without rendezvous is withering,
* unwanted, unclaimed, worthless!
Perhaps u should post this one on Sulls...;-)))
ReplyDeleteGood one Viv!!
told ya, I loved it ;)
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ReplyDeleteVivek Sharma comments:
on Apr 12 2005 10:48PM delete this comment block this user
Chaya,
Its almost cat and mouse game now:)
Following ur comment on blogspot, I transported She is just a rumor here, and then now again following ur lead, I am posting She is just a tumor here:)
I wish I had a clue about her:)!
chayalife comments:
on Apr 12 2005 6:14PM delete this comment block this user
O boy!! Viv, I do like the second one better...:-))))))
More...apt eh??
Write on....btw...post the second one seperately as well..it does not belong in a comment, methinks...;-))
Chay
Vivek Sharma comments:
on Apr 12 2005 1:33PM delete this comment block this user
In fact I could have written another version:)
And given it another sort of twist:)
She does really exist,
* but she is just a tumor!
We have never gelled,
* I really donot know her!
Yet I strive and strain,
* suffer with a sweet pain!
Aching each day to meet,
* a panacea down the street!
My ailment is quite abstract,
* has blossomed with her contact!
And with her my love is withering,
* unwanted, unclaimed, worthless!
chayalife comments:
on Apr 11 2005 11:48PM delete this comment block this user
;-))
You wont be sorry!! Lollz!!
Chay