Will you call me tonight
For your happy sound
Lights up a dozen candles
In my dark, lonely room
And in the soft glow
Of your spoken words
My life launches into
A lively, poetic imagery!
Will you call me tonight
And silence the bassdrums
Of my unsettled heart
By you nonchalant chuckles
And in the lyrics of
Your evanescent words
About trivial incidents
Whisper me a lullaby!
from sulekha:
ReplyDeleteVivek Sharma comments:
on Apr 9 2005 9:24AM delete this comment block this user
Thanks Shama, PG, Chaya:):)
Chaya:)... I guess I got carried away for once, and learnt my lesson:):)
Miss PG :)... Don't let any comment (particularly this author's (mine) misplaced ones) affect your own comments:)...
(Thats the beauty of it... I feel like a little fool, and yet cannot complain, but laugh with you both at myself.... :):)!! Beyond that, please let your comments and criticism runs unplugged:)!!)
miss_priyanka_gupta comments:
on Apr 9 2005 5:50AM delete this comment block this user
Chaayaa Me scarreeed! Please dont!! hmmm
:))))
Whats deal?? :)))
I dint recieve any note yet!!
Priyanka
chayalife comments:
on Apr 9 2005 4:16AM delete this comment block this user
Priyanka...
aap maar khayogi!! :-))
Agli poem padiyega...comments bhi pado aap...sab samajh mein aayega(gi) forget my genders...I always mess it up!! :-))))))
Chay
miss_priyanka_gupta comments:
on Apr 9 2005 4:11AM delete this comment block this user
Hi vivek
U r too romantic hmm:))
Did she call??
-Cheers
Priyanka
Dr Shama Shukla comments:
on Apr 8 2005 10:18PM delete this comment block this user
Simply beautiful poem .It touches the heart.
Vivek Sharma comments:
on Apr 6 2005 6:26PM delete this comment block this user
thanks raj, j_eyre and chaya!
It doesn't matter if she calls or not
My head is always rife with her thought:)
Raj_King comments:
on Apr 6 2005 7:14AM delete this comment block this user
Vivek,
Great piece.... gets romantic to the core.. hey its more pleasure when u wait for u r dear one to call ya..
:)))
Raj
j eyre comments:
on Apr 6 2005 3:42AM delete this comment block this user
That was a dear little piece..could so well empathise...and hope she did call!
chayalife comments:
on Apr 6 2005 3:12AM delete this comment block this user
Vivek....
Such tenderness....such delicate passion. It's...brought a tearful smile, I see. You do sentence your passions with meaning!!
'Lyrics of your evanescent words'....
Vivek, you are making me like and enjoy poetry!! :-))))))))
Write on!!
Chay