Sunday, February 19, 2006

I must quit smoking

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5 comments:

  1. ahhhh, but the memory of the high, the remembered fragrance titillates my senses again and again, and I succumb yet again to the temptation and revel in the sweet toxic fumes of your memories...

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  2. Comments from Dud Sea Scrawls:

    smoking gun
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    By bleu on Tue, 2006-02-21 00:04

    make sure you fire multiple rounds. I am glad your resolution is not ‘not to fire’ Sticking out tongue

    Even as you smoke your nicotine
    Having a shot or two of pot
    Do all of it in darkness clandestine
    but do make your tea while the pot is hot Sticking out tongue
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    Are you still smoking what
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    By Pradzie on Mon, 2006-02-20 18:45

    Are you still smoking what i think you were smoking when you were smokin this poem out?

    You seem to be enjoying what you’re smokin, so i would say, Happy Lung Cancer dude! Smiling
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    whoaaaaaa!
    new
    By Fizo on Mon, 2006-02-20 18:43

    you are on a roll..aren’t you?
    this was such a cool metaphor and done very well too…
    bahut achche Sharma ji..aur sunaaiye!!!
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    wow !
    new
    By chetiyaar on Mon, 2006-02-20 17:32

    THat was a very cool metaphor and done at every level ! lovely ! Man vivek,you are really making me read poems !
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    Vivek Ji
    By Silent Melody on Mon, 2006-02-20 10:32

    Vivek Ji lagta hai you are on a roll; Smoke on or rather Don’t. Liked it.
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    great
    By ano on Mon, 2006-02-20 08:55

    that was a cool metaphor. nice one vivek!
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  3. Thanks guys.... there is no smoke without fire, and this one nearly burnt me out.... as I said, I must quit smoking:)!

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  4. Anonymous9:55 AM

    wow! great imagery here..enjoyed this!

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  5. Blown away. Totally.

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